where is it we go when the dark beckons ...*awarded*
Lost In Nowheresville ThereÂ’s a worn out part of the rug where my feet traverse the same path each day. Worn down track in my brain, where neurons misfire readily each moment and twitch the eye goes...
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This is powerful and does hit home too, well written! OM ~*~*~Eastern Wings at Galadrial's Respite~*~*~
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Quote:My screams leave me baffled these nights, awake and hot, while Hate plays delicately – at first. You really drew my soul into this darkness, indigo. Raw emotions exude from your eloquent...
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Such emotion and feeling written here! Felt this deeply and that moving is what a poem should do. Great!!! ~Sane Hero~
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I could fell knots binding me to this, drawing me deeper and deeper.... Brava!
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ty very much Mr. OM for reading and the comment! indigo Fractured from the inside unseen is the battle which rages onward within behind these cracked eyes
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lost, thank you so much!! Yes, this was written during a moment when I was very disgruntled with work and with life alike. thank you for reading and commenting on this one! indigo Fractured from the...
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thanks for such a wonderful comment sanehero! sometimes we just have to let it all hang out ... LOL indigo Fractured from the inside unseen is the battle which rages onward within behind these cracked...
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snapper, I do hope you get yourself untied soon! thanks for the reply! indigo Fractured from the inside unseen is the battle which rages onward within behind these cracked eyes
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You've got some great imagery in here and fantastic wording. Well done. ~ SiobhanWhen you can see no light in the darkness, it's merely hidden by the shadows.
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thank you corrine for reading me! indigo Fractured from the inside unseen is the battle which rages onward within behind these cracked eyes
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siobhan, thank you very much for reading and your kind words in response to this! indigo Fractured from the inside unseen is the battle which rages onward within behind these cracked eyes
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This one is delightfully dark.
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thanks for reading and enjoying shadow! indigo Fractured from the inside unseen is the battle which rages onward within behind these cracked eyes
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gotta let it out sometimes! thanks for teh read scorp! indigo Fractured from the inside unseen is the battle which rages onward within behind these cracked eyes Rip out the wings of a butterfly for...
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This is powerful and although dark and haunting, quite an introspective piece. This is one of the best dark writes I've read of yours. ~ Becky "Bask with me in the glow of our hearts as one making the...
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thanks for checking this one out becky! every now and then the muse hits hard for these dark ones. indigo Fractured from the inside unseen is the battle which rages onward within behind these cracked...
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Quote:Stiffness to travel and plant its pestilence within the hollow of womb of my heart that no longer beats so my soul might live. My screams leave me baffled these nights, awake and hot, while Hate...
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as most of what I write these days, it's written at work. thus the influence at times the place has on my mood shows up in my poetry. It's a calamity, this life we lead from time to time. All I can...
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